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Mentoring Moment: Helping my students format their screenplays and develop their well-rounded, empathetic characters

4/11/2014

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Making sure your characters have conflict was adhered to in this short that I produced and co-wrote with a fantastic team...though in our 12-hour screenwriting deadline for the competition we overlooked making one of the characters empathetic. That would have helped us build to a logical story arc and conclusion, and made for a more engaging film. Still, it's a beautiful short--thanks to superb acting and a remarkable crew. But great acting and perfect tech can't save our script flaws. Lesson learned.
Interesting, well-rounded characters with concise do-or-die goals that pit the protagonist against the antagonist is what we strive for as writers.  Our hero needs to stride purposefully toward her goal, as our protagonist marches diligently in the opposite direction, ultimately placing our characters in a head-to-head challenge as solid as Dr. Seuss’ North-Going Zax meeting the South-Going Zax.

Unlike the single-minded Zax however, our characters need to be well-rounded and relatable. Even if we do not like the antagonist, in the best-constructed stories we should be able to empathize with him.  Consider the unlikely example of the comic book film Spider-Man and the antagonist Doc Ock, who begins the film as a friend and mentor to Peter Parker. Later, after his invention kills his wife, Doc Ock fixates on perfecting the contraption no matter what, thus creating an empathetic psychopath and someone with whom we can grieve, while hoping he is defeated by his equal and formidable opponent, the protagonist Spider-Man. 

While conflict can be huge in the form of bombs and destruction, it can also be small yet powerful. Examine your favorite drama or comedy (romantic or not). The ultimate conflict might erupt in a courtroom (My Cousin Vinnie or A Few Good Men), in a workplace (Gattaca, Dave, and American President), or in the neighbor’s living room (A Little Princess). The protagonist is the reluctant hero who finds that he or she must take on the challenge at all costs, even if the challenge is as simple as taking steps toward growing beyond your crippling OCD to help a neighbor and a friend (As Good As It Gets) or deciding to free a friend (E.T.).

In screenwriting, we also have specific parameters that we need to follow as we correctly format our script, since one page of screenplay equals about one minute of film.  I am happy to share with you a formatting document I've created for my students; contact me here if you'd like a copy.

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Mentoring Moment: Learning while teaching

3/17/2014

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A brilliant book that is helping my Media Writing class at UNH discover what it takes to launch a successful small business.
I'm teaching Media Writing at the University of New Hampshire now. As in right this moment now. We're writing a blog for our proposed business sites as part of this week's quiz.

Each semester the class evolves, but this semester it completely changed. So much so that I am doing the homework with my students. Why? Because I'm teaching from an entirely new book. It focuses on launching a successful small business, and all the social media and internet outreach that involves. 

While my focus is ever on the writing, I am also eager to learn from my students. Each week we explore what we've discovered during the homework phase of reading and completing the exercises at the end of each chapter in Marketing Shortcuts for the Self-Employed by Patrick Schwerdtfeger, a book suggested to me by a colleague. 

The book compliments my students' natural internet abilities, and often highlights my own weaknesses in an online world. "Here's what turns out to be an example of what NOT to do," is a phrase I uttered after studying the chapters on building a perfect website. (I've since redesigned and relaunched my still imperfect site.)

My students seem to appreciate that I am learning alongside them--or I hope they do, anyway. I appreciate that they're willing to do things like brainstorm for each other at a moment's notice. When one student had trouble writing a one-line description for her company, we took it to the board and hashed it out until it was perfect. Today, when another had trouble with the focus of her blog and the site descriptor, we again took it to the board. 

Last week we each sent around a sheet of paper that brainstormed possible blog topics; at the end of the exercise, each of us was surprised to see a valuable list of genuinely great ideas for future blogs. Not only are we learning about each person's business idea, but we're starting to think like the customers we hope to attract. 

My customers--my students--have become my teachers, my inspiration, and my sounding board. I know every semester this is true of any of my classes, but here and now, in this moment, as the last student completes his quiz-assigned blog post, it is especially true. I only hope I can pass their tests, and be the professor they need me to be in order to help them see the possibilities in writing and in business. 
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Mentoring Moment: Turning a question into an opportunity to teach research skills to a teen

3/14/2014

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You'll notice that this blog also appears on my GreenChairPictures.blogspot site, which I may retire soon. I am trying to determine which place is better to publish my blogs as I begin posting with regularity again.
While working with my junior high mentee last winter, she asked about a local legend: the Ghost of Ocean Born Mary. "Who was Mary?" she wondered.

Our research on the internet, at the local library, and at the town's historical society turned up more than just information about the Widow Mary Wallace; we also learned about the huckster who moved to town in 1917 and proceeded to spin a number of yarns about the Ghost of Ocean Born Mary who allegedly haunted the home he shared with his mother.

As an internationally-recognized photographer, Louis Maurice Auguste "Gussie" Roy knew his way around the press. During the 1920s, 30s, and 40s, stories of the ghost who haunted his Henniker home were published across the country. At the height of his publicity campaign, as many as a hundred tourists could be seen queuing up to take the famous Ghost Tour.

Wanting to share the juicy details with others, we decided a stage play would be the best presentation. Thus was born "The Ghost & Gussie Roy." Coincidentally, we were also able to whip the play into shape by the 200th anniversary of Mary Wallace's death: Feb. 13. It will be featured as a staged reading on Wednesday, March 19, at 7 p.m. at the Congregational Church of Henniker.

What's next? We hope to see the play fully staged, of course. And we're considering co-writing a screenplay for a film about Gussie Roy and his Ghost, which would be filmed and released in time to celebrate Ocean Born Mary's 300th birthday in 2020.

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    Dana Biscotti Myskowski teaches media writing, film & scriptwriting at UNH; mentors locally; and teaches creative writing, scriptwriting, & composition at SNHU online. She also produces and writes short films and nonprofit videos. Finally nearing the finish line of recovering from a long illness, Dana has returned to writing, blogging, producing shorts, and life in general.

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